My First Character

Started by The Weird Sir, Sat 20/12/2003 22:18:00

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The Weird Sir

Here he is...



Some problems (some are easily correctable, I ust haven't had time yet):

-Shoulders are gross
-Hands on side views are gross
-Face looks rounder in front view
-Feet on side view not consistent with front (this should be easily fixed)
-Legs too small (this should also be simple to remedy)

If anyone can help me with some of these (and maybe show me some other bugs to work out) that would be great.

veryweirdguy

I think his head is a bit too big. While a moderately oversized head can be used well, I just don't think it looks right on this character. Lower the head as well (make the neck shorter) and it should look better

Also, one way of making the hands look better would be to straighten his arms - at the moment they are slightly bent at the elbow. Lastly, I think you should make the hands a little bigger. Compare your own hands to your face - they should almost cover it. It's surprising, but true.

Other than that, nice first character! Certainly better than my first ever!

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