a posing lady I drew (warning: contains some nudity)

[12431]

well, I am practicing realistic drawing, but I'm not good at it. anywayz, I made this one:


I drew the skeleton first in a pose in PSP, and put skin on top. whatever.
just tell me what you think

[sp]

the hair is a mess!!! so is the see-trough thing. try and clean it up a bit because it looks lke she was playing in the dirt!

[Scummbuddy]

i do like the pose shes in. her facial features seem too bright for her skin tone and the overall tone of the picture. i think i would cut back on thier brightness and size. i like the hairstyle, but would like to see it done in a different way. and i would do some sort of plastic sheet filter for the translucent sheet, or something.

overall, its showing your improving artwork over the past couple months,  i know you took a break. keep up the good work, and keep us posted on more art

[12431]

thanks