New Character - Need C&C

[Johnny Odd]

 
Woo! Great sprie my man! I love it - much better than I could ever do
I think the side-looking eyes are cool - but will they look good looking forward? Otherwise she'll be looking side ways all the time....
But good work!

[TheSaint]

would u mind if i draw my criticism on ur last sprite(easier for me i think) or u prefer it written in words?

cheers,
TheSaint

[pixelcat]

Thanks for the continued feedback...  I'm finding it hard to find time at the moment, so no updates.

TheSaint - I'd appreciate any criticism, whatever's easier.

[TheSaint]

right hip/waist area is like if someone had smacked her with a baseball bat leaving a piece missing,
legs/thigs should be thickened (blue lines) or the legs changed a bit so it doesnt give impression that parts are broken or too round.

i hope i helped a bit,
TheSaint

[edited: typo wrote thin instead of thick]