New Music - Persian type feel

[BerserkerTails]

Song I did for the Tune contest. I'd just like some crit because I'm new to the whole midi sequencing thing... What do you like, not like about it?

http://www.ssonicnet.com/lobt/tune.mid

[ScottDoom]

Wow! That's great. I love everything except for the.. uhh.. bass soundin' thingy. It doesn't really fit with the rest, except later when it's just a steady beat. Sorry if that's confusing. I'll look into the file later to see what instruments were used if you need me to explain better.

Edit: After listening to it for a few more times, I think that the bass does fit. It is a well composed song, except for the ending which is very abrupt. Is it like that for a certain reason?

[BerserkerTails]

Well, the intstrumentation is to fit Damien's requirments for the Tune contest, which were: Sitar, Electric Bass, Trumpet and Hammond Organ.

The ending? Well... I just, kinda, got lazy? I knew I wasn't going to use this except for practice, so I didn't write a real ending.