(not quite so japanese) house background

Started by waffer, Sun 07/09/2003 15:43:31

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waffer

This is my first background to my first game. The game takes place in japan but as you can see theres no obvious connection to japan. So here is what I want help with: I want the scene to look more japanese and I also want to add details, shadows, vegetation and maybe textures.
So please C&C my background and feel free to edit it!

--- Edited 06 Oct 2003, 22:42---
Here is a complete remake of my previous background (you can find the old one here
"http://www32.brinkster.com/oaklake/upload/egohouse.jpg"<-copy link).



C&C Please!!

12431

I don't know why, but mountains remind me of japan. and transparent sliding doors
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menaze

Im not quite sure but the houses look too "western"
try to make the roof look like a pagoda or something.
like this:

                 _____________                
               /                            \
           \_/_______________\_/    
               |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
               |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
              /-------------------------\
          \_/_________________\_/
             |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
             |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|

menaze

............_____________
.........../..........................\
......\_/_______________\_/
.........|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
.........|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
......../................................\
....\_/_________________\_/
.......|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
.......|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|

Hope it looks better this time

Moresco

#4
Hey, your background looks great I think, but if you need some pointers I'll try to help out.  These links try to show the design of a traditional japanese home, but may not be exactly what you're looking for in the design.

Link #1 ::: Traditional Japanese Home 1
Link #2 ::: Traditional Japanese Home 2
Link #3 ::: Architecture 1
Link #4 ::: Architecture 2
Link #5 ::: Architecture 3


I hope all that helps & isn't at the same time overwhelming, just how I do my homework :)



EDIT: I added this image.  What I did is simply change the appearance of the house. It's no longer two story(not sure what a two story version would look like really), & I added the altered coloring, red bars around the building & the screen doors(or glass).  It's not really 3-d or whatever anymore but you get the idea. The wide look to the roofs, intricate designs in the roofing, lots of japanese-ish things around the setting.  That will really help to pull the viewer towards japan and away from a western point of view I think.

I've never been to japan, & I can read/write very well but have trouble speaking it. This is my best guess you could say.  Good luck! If you need more examples(photos of houses for example), let me know I can whip more up...



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waffer

Thanks Menaze for your beautiful art :D. And I agree it looks to western. Im going to change the roof.  And thanks Moresco for the links, I really like that crazyenglish.jpg.  ;) Maybe I will use that sign somewhere in the game.

But I still needs help with details, shadows, vegetation and textures.

Moresco

Here's more scenery:

Japan photo 1
Japan photo 2

These photos will give you an idea. Not much there, and really only vegetationish stuff.  There's so much more to be found, use google & you can't go wrong.
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waffer

Remake!!
Well I didnt like the old one so heres the new one. It lack some detail but that will be added.

Xackery

Howdy.. Just took a couple mins with your latest image to give you a possible sketch for the house..


tell me if you're interested in going this route, i'll send ya the outline to draw in

waffer

Looks great Xackery. I like the roof, gives the house a more japanese look. Please send!

Xackery

Note I didn't draw this, so don't give me credit. I just basically did a search for outlines of a house that seemed to match your pic and did some color selection and threshold tweaks to get the above image. PM'd ya.

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