Ol' Angry Teacher

Started by HillBilly, Wed 12/05/2004 21:30:01

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Pessi

Really nice!

When she talks, her lower jaw should be moving more than the rest of her head. In fact, it should be the only thing moving in that sense and the movement of her entire head should be kind just secondary motion. But that's just a "should".

Keep it up, one of the coolest things I've seen made in MSPaint!

HillBilly

Quote from: OSC on Thu 13/05/2004 17:28:57
in my humble opinion, she needs a 'o' view for her mouth.

kinda like thisÃ,  :o

ya know what i mean ... rite?

just say: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and think about your mouth shape

err yeh

Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã, 

I did that, but it looked really stupid.

Pessi: Yes, it should. But I think it looks okay this way too.

Scummbuddy

i would make her brow move in a v shape every now and then, to get the feeling of an angry person. (during the talk view)
- Oh great, I'm stuck in colonial times, tentacles are taking over the world, and now the toilets backing up.
- No, I mean it's really STUCK. Like adventure-game stuck.
-Hoagie from DOTT

Ben

#23
I really like this. I love the style-- reminds me of DOTT..

My only suggestion is to vary the thickness of the lines to show depth. For example, the wrinkle on her face shoudn't be as deep at the ends as it is in the middle.


EDIT: Like this


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