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Started by Flippy_D, Wed 13/04/2005 17:47:48

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Flippy_D

Italia.mid made for the competition over in t'other board.

Daniël Brooks

I like it; it's quite atmospherical.

I would soften the volume of the staccato guitar a bit, I guess...

Keep it up! :D

Sluggo

I like it too. This is merely a suggestion, but when I have heard tremolo guitar passages like that it is usually carried out throughout the entire melodic line, although it might get annoying after awhile. Maybe if you just continue it until the next note change, instead of resting on the 3rd beat of the measure.

Phemar


Gregjazz

Yeah, try messing around with the dynamics as well as the overall mixing.

Flippy_D

Yeah, it's not as good as I'd like, but it becomes tricky...

Anyway. Regarding continuing the tremelo, I know exactly what you mean, but I had lifted so many ideas from the few classical guitar tracks I know that I was becoming worried I'd have nothing of my own in there - hence the not-quite-genuine feel (it's more like a lullaby, as someone said).

Ta for feedback.

Pet Terry

You know, I've heard quite a lot of your tunes and I must say many of your tunes sound like they are made for a Snes-RPG. If I was to make a Terranigma/Chrono Trigger-type RPG I know who I would ask to make music for it.

As for this tune, it is like straight from from Terranigma and that's enough to make me happy. In other words, excellent, I don't find anything wrong with it.

If you want to try and improve it though you could try panning the instruments a bit.

Awesome, keep composing, I will be listening your tunes.
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Flippy_D

Super. Now I really do have to play Terrawhatsit sometime. I've heard it too often to not have any info on it! :P

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