Please crit this beat!

[He-Man]

Hi

I've just finished this rock/hiphop/whatever beat and now it would be nice with some crits on it.
Later on I might make it a little longer and add some vocals...

The song can be found here:
http://www.nielshs.dk/musik/DjHerpes-BassTrip.mp3
(You might need to right click and choose Save as...)

Get ready to party
Your pal
Niels

[vict0r]

Wow! Great beat/tune thingy!
I don't have anything to say other that keep up the good work
But i'd suggest that you don't add vocals. I don't really know why, but I really don't think that would make it better.

[He-Man]

Thanks a lot VictOr. I'm really happy that you like it.
I think I'll try with some vocals later on but maybe you're right that it won't make the song better.
I hope it will...

Cheers

[SinSin]

Very good i like it
If you were to put vocals into it i would say that if you were to elongate the part inbetween 27 - 34 seconds maybe by a few bars and repeat this process a couple of times post and prior to the middle 8 (the guitar solo)
I like it alot and im generally a punk fan but u my friend may have opened my eyes and ears significantly

If you dont mind me asking how did u create this and with what programmes

Sinsin