Assignment front page

[He-Man]

Hi

I'm almost done writing a big assignment on education and game mechanics. I'm working on a case with an edutainment game that teaches young people about democracy called the Powergame.
I'm printing the day after tomorrow...
This is the front page:

BTW it's in Dainish...

Please comment on it!

I've resized it so quallity is a little bad. The lange one can be found here:
http://nielshs.dk/misc/forside-real.jpg  <- 1.4 mb

Cheers

[JackAnimated]

Really good. Love the colours and his left hand is brilliant.

[He-Man]

Thanks for the answer. I'm happy you like it!
Anyone else got something to add?
I'm printing tomorrow...

[Krysis]

It's pillowshaded. Maybe a proper lightsource is a good idea. I love the mouth.

[Evil]

I'd make the table wider. At least half the width. The width of the wrist of the left hand is weird. Pillow shading isn't terrible, but some places, like the table under the arm, could use some help.

[He-Man]

Thanks
That helped a lot!
I think I'll fix the pillow shading...