Quest for Flamel's Stone main Character

[Sukotto]

This is the main character for my game The Quest for Flamel's Stone.

I think he looks pretty good, but any help'd be great!

[IM NOT TEH SPAM]

You should probably take the spaces away from the image thing... but since i'm here:

[Krysis]

I was about to say his legs are too short - they aint. His hands and torso are too long. And he has no neck.
Here is a reaaly quick remake to give you some ideas:


Uh, really, guys, learn some basic stuff about human proportions.

Also he looks like noone. He has no personallyty, no nothing. I mean if u see Bernard from DOTTA u think - Nerd&Loser. If u see Ben Trottle u see some big bad guy. Try thinking what this guy is and how u can show it.

[Sukotto]

yea, I was really goin for a 'baggy' appearance, but you're right, arms shouldn't be baggy, it's just not right