Character Concept

[Lewis_Morgan]

Hello,

I'm new to the forums and i'm hoping to make a few adventure games in my spare time in the summer holidays, however I want to know what i'm doing before I start so heres a character concept that may apper in the game,

Please leave your comments and critisms.

Thanks.

[Dan_N]

Hello. I'm new here also. Anyways, I saw your character and he looks good, you really got talent. But, frankly, what do you want to do with him? I saw the Coast Guard hat. Maybe they find a dead body or something... I honestly don't know. Could fill me in please. (and if any of this sounded sarcastic, I'm sorry, but I'm honest, I'm not being sarcastic in the least; I just wanted to say this because I don't want to get kicked out because I was sarcastic; I'm new, this is my first critisism...).

Oh, and by the way, how on Earth did you post that image. I can't seem to get it to work...  :'(

[Andail]

This forum does not have a quality control, but could you please
1. Draw on blank paper (this is a demand most art-sites make)
2. Crop down the picture so that it only shows the relevant parts

Also, what you can do yourself before asking for more c&c:
1. Clean up your image in a program, by drawing neat outlines and maybe some basic colouring.

[Lewis_Morgan]

Thank you for the comments!

Dan_N_GameZ: Thank you for the compliments! To be honest, when I drew this picture I didn't have any ideas for what I was going to do. I was hoping I could extract insperation from what I drew but it seems you've just done it for me. I think finding a dead body would be a great idea, and has really lit a few lightblubs in my brain. Thanks!

Andail: I'll try and keep those in mind for my next drawing, it was just a quick 5 minute sketch so I thought i'd keep it in its orignal form, i'll put in a bit more effort next time.