RPG character - how does she look?

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Mon 10/04/2006 20:58:00

Hello folks!

As you moght have noticed, I have started quite a few games already, but I won't bore you with a list and comments. This is the main character of an RPG I'm working on. I want some good old C&C about how I made her.

I prefer to keep the main body shape this way (or else I'll have to adapt my sprite bases, which is a nightmare to me), but I won't bite if it's no good.

Well,
here she is.

I'm awaiting your reply!

~Yurina

DoorKnobHandle · Mon 10/04/2006 20:59:38

Your link is "broken":

Quote from: the pageDSE Server-verzoek niet toegestaan!

Dit verzoek /~yurina/walk_south-01_kairi_FORUMVERSION.PNG aan de Web-server van Digitale Stad Eindhoven is niet toegestaan!

LimpingFish · Mon 10/04/2006 21:00:08

Unfortunately, I get an error page.

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Mon 10/04/2006 21:04:19

Other link then...

http://www.dse.nl/~yurina/gamefiles.htm

Of course, I forgot my "no directlinking!"-server thingy...

LimpingFish · Mon 10/04/2006 21:06:17

Very nice sprite.

A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other? $:-\$

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Mon 10/04/2006 21:07:45

Quote from: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:06:17
A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other? $:-\$

Didn't notice that... I'll improve it right away.

EDIT: improved version is up!

LimpingFish · Mon 10/04/2006 21:19:50

Very nice sprite indeed.

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Mon 10/04/2006 21:30:42

Quote from: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:19:50
Very nice sprite indeed.

Thanks!

Nacho · Mon 10/04/2006 21:41:11

I tried to link the image to help the crits, but I get a red x. Sorry. Nice sprite though.

Peder 🚀 · Mon 10/04/2006 22:04:15

Quote from: Yurina on Mon 10/04/2006 21:30:42

Looks good!
I like it.

dont know of anything you could change....

Is there a nose there?Ã,Â $:-\$
maybe a bit hard to make anything look like a nose on a so small sprite..

lo_res_man · Mon 10/04/2006 23:17:14

I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion $:-\$

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Tue 11/04/2006 07:53:39

Thanks for putting it up this way, Peder, my website server doesn't support hotlinking.

Quote from: lo_res_man on Mon 10/04/2006 23:17:14
I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion $:-\$

Well, I made my own base (sxplains the angle

), and I like larger sprites a bit better than small ones. I can make more details!

I'm glad you all like it (quotelist would be too long), Maybe I'll put up some other characters I'm working on (I need different bases for those...)

Tomb Raider · Wed 12/04/2006 18:18:13

Looks pretty flawless, can't wait to see it animated.

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Wed 12/04/2006 18:19:18

I'll work on an animated version the next days, but for now I'm trying to get at least 3 backgrounds done for in the game so I can FINALLY make an in production thread.

AÃ¯Â¿Â½rendyll (formerly Yurina) · Thu 20/04/2006 07:55:59

I edited the hands. Take a look.

~Yurina