Shaman's hut

[jrl2222]

I'll do a mock up in bryce when I get home from work tonight. Unless someone else beats me to it. It will show the correct perspective. Thats the quickest way I have of finding where it is off.

[Mats Berglinn]

Well, I kind of making the latest version after the "incorrect perspective" suggestions so I know the fridge and the bookshelf doesn't look great but here is the latest version:



Changes: Added some sun-light coming from the open door. Added some lights on the cieling so the light at night doesn't only come from the tiki-lanterns. Also, I have changed some the leaves and grass in the middle so it doesn't look so "uniformal" as someone said earlier.

I know the left wall is still unfinished but I wait with that until I can get the shelf and the fridge corrected.

[jrl2222]

Just a quick render in Bryce.

[BlackMan890]

humm

-the fridge is very small, i think it is better to first make it a little larger, then worry about perspective
-the chair looks flat i exept the arms, please add a line between the arms on the chayr
-please fix the iron things on the drum, i made an exemple, please see below
-please make the shadow on the pot circelar*
-also, i think it would be best if you make the "wall" a litttle rough
small suggestion
-why not fewer the bookst and create a book holder you know

well thats about it, can't wait for you to finnish the perspective and the wall
good lick on your project



*sorry about my english

[Khris]

Four little issues that bother me:

1. The perspective of the fridge & shelves is still wrong, parallel lines meet each other at infinity, not in the middle of the room as in your pic. Right now, the top of the bookshelf looks very angled, Murray would probably slide down.(Check the Bryce pic for reference.)

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2. The carpet in the middle looks nice, but the yellow lines don't go through the center, which is probably, what you intended.

3. The power outlets are mounted to a grass wall...
Maybe you did that on purpose, but you could place a generator outside the hut and connect the fridge to it. (And even add a generator puzzle, if you want.)

4. The Tiki-lamps are floating in mid-air, tie them to some wooden beams.

[Mats Berglinn]

I'm working on fixing the fridge and the bookshelf. The bookshelf is not done, I just show it to see if I'm heading in the right direction (I'll add "Murray" and the books later).

And this is how the background looks now, still under construction (I will add a wooden beam for those tiki-lanterns soon) but I want to know how you like of the fridge so far.



Don't mind about the bookshelf here, it's under construction like I said.

khrismuc: What do you mean about the yellow lines? Do you mean the yellow pattern or the sunlight? I know about the electric outlet is in a grasswall but don't ask me how it works. Good thing about the generator suggestion, it will give me something to do for the background for the native village. Sorry, no generator puzzle in this game. The story and the puzzles have been written a couple of years earlier and I didn't include a power generator. Maybe something I could use it in a sequel or something.

Goél: It's a barrel, not a drum. I'm going to fix it as soon as I'm done with the fridge and bookshelf. Where on the chair should I put a line? I don't see what you mean. What do you mean make the wall "rough"? Why not show an example?

[Khris]

I was talking of the yellow pattern on the carpet.



Please excuse the really badly drawn lines, but I was to lazy to get rid of the line tool's arrowÃ, 
I hope you get the idea, though

Chris

EDIT: and your books look like cheese balls

[Mats Berglinn]

Yet another version of the hut:



Changes: The carpet's pattern have been corrected. Shadow under voodoo-pot have been corrected. The iron holders on the barrel is fixed. Added a bookshelf with correct perspective with Murray souvenir. Made the top of the barrel less "drum-y".

So, what do you think of this one apart from the unfinished things that is still left undone?