Some cartoony sketches

[Flippy_D]

I doodle in English. My teacher knows I pay attention, so he's cool and lets me, occasionally popping me questions to make sure I'm listening. It's good fun.

I take both English Lang and Lit with this guy, and so I get to see a few people while he's taking me. Just randomly I started sketching them, and they liked them (on the whole), so I thought I'd post them here. Typically, they didn't scan too true to the original, but I patched them up best I could with the somewhat primitive software and they ain't too bad now. Not as good as I'd like, but acceptable.

Without further ado:



Comments/crits/legal action?

[Babar]

Do they all actually have the same sort of nose shape?
Besides that, the only thing I notice is that a bit of the lower centre girl's eyes should be showing. Otherwise they look pretty good. You have all the characters needed to make a comic series now.

[Necro]

call the comic "Patrick and his 6 Pscho Ex Girlfriends"

[Ali]

Patrick does look as if he's checking the escape routes...


The similar noses don't bother me, you've made them look distinct but clearly within the same style. I think they'd look really nice coloured - or even just painted over in black and white.