Some tunes need critic

[Dualnames]

No drums or voice
Both midis.

http://rapidshare.com/files/17142645/chisong.mid.html


http://rapidshare.com/files/17142706/swallow.mid.html

Well I am thinking of making my own music for my games so lemme know if I should hire someone

[Haddas]

The melody is nice. Nothing wrong with the melody. It could really use some drums though. In some parts it seems a little confusing, but nothing too bad.

Nice as the tunes might be, the guitar might catch the attention of the player a little too much. There's nothing wrong with the tunes in themselves, but they're a bit hard for background tunes. It'd be great if you could make them softer, if you know what i mean. A little more variation too, especially in the second tune.

[Phemar]

Hey, you got some cool tunes there. I don't know if they'll work in an adventure game though.

Anyway I like how you've used those like 256th notes or something (!!) to create muting for the guitar, sounds really cool.

I just fiddled with the piece a bit to show you how it could sound with drums and bass.

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/swallowedit.mid

- Added in a really basic drum rhythm
- Added a really basic bass line
- Changed track 5 to a distortion guitar (so you have the distortion and overdrive playing at once)
- Shifted track 3 and track 5 to different speakers, to create a sort of stereo effect.

I didn't do much, just small things. I think it would sound really cool with a proper drumbeat and a good bass line.

Keep working on it!!

[Dualnames]

Hey, you got some cool tunes there. I don't know if they'll work in an adventure game though.

Anyway I like how you've used those like 256th notes or something (!!) to create muting for the guitar, sounds really cool.

I just fiddled with the piece a bit to show you how it could sound with drums and bass.

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/swallowedit.mid

- Added in a really basic drum rhythm
- Added a really basic bass line
- Changed track 5 to a distortion guitar (so you have the distortion and overdrive playing at once)
- Shifted track 3 and track 5 to different speakers, to create a sort of stereo effect.

I didn't do much, just small things. I think it would sound really cool with a proper drumbeat and a good bass line.

Keep working on it!!

I love what you've done with it. Really rocks.

[Phemar]

Well if you wanted I could remake the whole track, but with a proper drumbeat and some good bass rhythms. Let me know

[Dualnames]

Well if you wanted I could remake the whole track, but with a proper drumbeat and some good bass rhythms. Let me know

Please do so. The sample I got was quite excellent.