Critic background art.

Started by Dualnames, Fri 23/02/2007 04:31:41

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Dualnames

Those are images i made for a new game i'm making called "Dave Dell in LONE CASE"
So i am asking for critique and possible advice on what to fix or add or remove or whatever.

A bar

an entrance to a building

The main menu



Worked on Strangeland, Primordia, Hob's Barrow, The Cat Lady, Mage's Initiation, Until I Have You, Downfall, Hunie Pop, and every game in the Wadjet Eye Games catalogue (porting)

ildu

Too much emphasis on lighting effects. But it's original, so I'll allow it.

MadReizka

The perspective seems to be off, and the colors could be better, as in they seem too "blank" to me. As in blank blue, yellow etc.

And the details in walls and floor could use some work.
I do like the mood and atmosphere those lighteffects bring to the pictures.
I do music and visual effects:
http://www.distantshitfilms.net/personal/

remminycricket

This is just a thought but in the first picture with all the white squares, it'd be cool if all those were picture frames with pictures and stuff inside of them...just a thought, but I also like the lighting effects

Dualnames

Quote from: remminycricket on Sat 24/02/2007 00:48:24
This is just a thought but in the first picture with all the white squares, it'd be cool if all those were picture frames with pictures and stuff inside of them...just a thought, but I also like the lighting effects


Thanks to all. About you now quotd guy. I wanted them to be photos at the first place. Since this time I am gonna take my time before releasing it i'll try and put some photos.
Worked on Strangeland, Primordia, Hob's Barrow, The Cat Lady, Mage's Initiation, Until I Have You, Downfall, Hunie Pop, and every game in the Wadjet Eye Games catalogue (porting)

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