A whimsical scene

[Krysis]

What the.... Krysis? What's wrong with you? The ass is actually growing again, and now, it looks like Guybrush is giving the monkey a friggin' prolapsed rectum, as the bottom of the bitticks is poking out PAST the leg!

Errr, nothing's wrong with me.
I was just trying to show how the leg shoud bend. I aint got time to draw asses and fix fingers, ok?

[esper]

Hrmmm... Sorry , Krysis, I just thought it was funny. No offense meant. You're a better artist than I ever will be.

I tried to draw a little mock up of exactly where the ass would be if you hadn't ever changed the initial drawing. Note that the little line between the legs... which may very well have been the ass line if you hadn't drawn a complete seperate pair of floating, disembodied buttocks, makes them too far apart.



The pic on the side shows how the torso goes directly into the bitticks, and the bottom shows how legs go directly into the bitticks. It's a seamless, symbiotic relationship. The legs and torso share the posterior. Sorry about the quality, I'm at work and only had Paint and no tablet...

EDIT: I'm sorry, I had to...

This lesson in assmastery brought to you by Esper...

[Tom S. Fox]

Well, I might not be an assmaster, but who wants to be one, at all?

@ManicMatt: No, Guybrush, not even my "weird" Guybrush-parody is violent enough, to break a monkey leg!
I'll try to find a way to make it look better.

@Krysis: Yes, you are right. I will adjust the fingers.

@esper: What do you mean, the line of the tail is too thick?
Is as thick than all the other lines: 1 pixel!
And the chin, well I realized it, but I thought, it would seem as if the mouth is grimaced with pain.

It actually looked more realistic and less forced when the monkey's head was down...

What do you mean, it looks "forced"?
And thank you for the lesson, but I already tried it like this, as you can see, but then the leg looked broken.
But I will give it another go!

[Snarky]

Thomas, just to make sure...

You are aware of the double entendre invoked by "spanking the monkey", right? I mean, that is intentional?

[Tom S. Fox]

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!Ã,  :o
I HAD NO IDEA!!!Ã, 
THIS IS DISGUSTING!!!




No, just kidding!Ã, 
You got the gag, Snarky!Ã, 

Well, however, I finally made a new version of the image:


I tried to make the leg not to look broken, fixed the chin and tired to revise the knuckles.
Well?

[ManicMatt]

That is the best artwork i have ever seen in my life!!!

Now get on with the game sheesh! 

[Tom S. Fox]

That is the best artwork i have ever seen in my life!!!

Bootlicker! 

Now get on with the game sheesh!Ã, 

I'm just trying to implement your suggestions! 
Besides, I already work on other stuff for the game, too! 

[CaptainPancake]

Something needs to be done with the monkey's left leg.  It appears shorter than the right one.  Try showing a bit of joint and lengthening it a bit and it should look OK.

The monkey's right hand appears somewhat twisted.  I'm not sure how that would be re-worked.  Get some refrence art/photos and try again.

The man's left hand isn't sitting very naturally on the monkey's back.  Again, get some refrence material for that one.

Aside from those small issues (Mainly perspective stuff really.), the image could really use some shading and highlights, though that's not exactly everyone's strong suit.  I guarantee that with some decent shading, the depth of the image would increase tenfold.  Remember, often times the time spent on an image will directly reflect in it's quality.