torture chamber, please help! (WARNING! Gore & nudity)- updated, now with Hell..

Started by Fizz, Fri 13/08/2004 09:07:06

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DanClarke

Its a cool image, but I think that the guy looks out of place, the bottom half of him at least looks rather 'cartoony', where-as the skulls and candles etc look more realistic.

12431

It's a nice picture, but the table looks 30 feet long! exept from that, I like it very much  ;D
Albert Barillé and Hergé, we love you

Andail

Darth, the paintings in the ceiling totally rocked. It improved this image by 62%.

Blurring the penis is a bit awkward, though. I suggest covering it up with a blanket.

Erwin_Br

Looking at the perspective, I think his legs should be bigger/thicker. The table is getting wide, while the legs stay more or less the same size. I hope you know what I mean  ;)

--Erwin

Eggie

Maybe there should be some symmetry on the ceiling. I mean, this guy's dying a horrible death, at least give him something pretty to look at.
And there's no reason not to have a penis in your game because we are independant and are, as such...ABOVE THE LAW!

Nhazgul

I think you should chop off the penis and have it lying at the floor

BruisedWeasel

Wow, the room is very immaculate. I suggest extending the images of hell to the walls. The added detail might make the room seem more claustrophobic(sp?) and thus more menacing.  The tile floor looks to be in good condition. Perhpas some cracked or even missing corners of linoleum (or asbestos, if the tiles are as evil as the room itself.) The stone pillars look old, so the new tiling looks a bit out of place. The table should be remain clean and polished, though. I know if I had a table for offerings to Satan, I'd keep it clean so I can see the organs and what-not mirrored perfectly in a mandala of orgasmic pain.

Ozwalled

Quote from: Nhazgul on Sun 15/08/2004 15:37:04
I think you should chop off the penis and have it lying at the floor

Better yet: make the player chop it off and gain it as an iventory item!....

What? This isn't a Lorena Bobbit game? Oh, well neverMIND then!

iron_man

Quote from: jannar85 on Sat 14/08/2004 00:52:50
Hey, nice!
Looks a lot like Jesus! :D

What kind of comment is this ?  ???
May i ask, in what religion you believe ?

MarVelo


Hollister Man

Seeing as how your Sig has the A-Team in it,

"I pity the fool ... who bumps year-old threads!"
That's like looking through a microscope at a bacterial culture and seeing a THOUSAND DANCING HAMSTERS!

Your whole planet is gonna blow up!  Your whole DAMN planet...

MarVelo


Chicky



TheYak

There's so much detail on the shelves that they distract from the overall image.  I might drape a cloth over his nether-regions, less for obscuring the penis The Penis and more to add interesting details.  His limbs are at very stiff/straight angles and that makes him look more fake than skin tones or other small problems. 

I'd also expect that unless that's where he's been laid to rest, there might be manacles or leather straps holding him in place.  A blood gutter also seems appropriate under the circumstances.  For the painting on the ceiling, I'd rather see vague/blurry details than something that looks fairly cartoony (mostly the demon/dragon's expression, the people seem alright). 

I think the dragon could be fixed by removing the pupil and putting some structure lines around the eye to give it shape, there's just something about the wide-eyed expression that makes it comical.

It's good work, makes me wish it were for a game rather than an album cover, but *shrug* 

Scummbuddy

well, happy birthday to Fizz! (figured might as well, now that his thread is ressurected.)

I cant believe that this thread really is over a year old. I would have guessed that it was maybe from spring 2005, not august 2004. Crazy how time flies on the net.
- Oh great, I'm stuck in colonial times, tentacles are taking over the world, and now the toilets backing up.
- No, I mean it's really STUCK. Like adventure-game stuck.
-Hoagie from DOTT

Paper Carnival

Nice and freaky. If there's one thing I don't like is the art on the ceiling, try drawing it as you would on a flat surface and then skew it to fit the ceiling.

AlbinoPanther

Last Active: 06 Nov 2005, 18:26 Fizz

So to whom you give C&C when the creator of this BG is not here

This topic is so cool

Andail


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