need some critic on my character

[punkAGSskater]

i need some help on the shading, and i dont like the way his hair is.


x3

[ManicMatt]

Can i suggest you give him a crotch as his legs are too high up?

And his neck is too long.

And there's is more to crit, but I'll leave it at that for now.

[punkAGSskater]

how is this


x3

[sergiocornaga]

Trilby based?

[punkAGSskater]

i used his face and legs as reference becasuse i suck at drawing both

[raddicks]

he has penguin legs dont you think?
I personally would have left the legs as it is but raise the torso higher