Wip: Oldmans face (Update: (27.12.)He got a body!)

Started by Seminus, Wed 22/12/2004 11:10:36

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Hi folks,
back again :) This time with a little wip on one of my charakter for my upcoming adventuregame. It's at the moment just the head without hair. (this comes next...) C&C welcome! What do you think?

[Edit] Added a body. Next task is to create some real legs and feets. And find him some cloth ;)  [edit]



Face closeup.




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Paper Carnival

Woah, nice work there. The difference around his eye's area makes him look satanic. If you intended that way, then I suggest you don't put much hair on him but do put some

Mats Berglinn

I suggest to put wrinkles on him. Right now he looks too young to be an old man.
I like the glasses, it makes him look old in those.

TheDude

Looks, great. Kinda looks like the guy from Bladerunner. Are his brows supposed to be at different heights?

Indie Boy

Nice, but the right eye looks like its going to pop out! He reminds me more of the guy from enternal darkness
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InCreator

Nostrils.
They're too thin.

Seminus

Thx for the critics!

@theDude:
The eyebrows are ment to be this way. I think this makes more sens when I've done the texture work.

@InCreator:
Thx man! Your are right! Change that rightaway!

@Potter:
Hmm. Ok. Have to change something there.


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@InCreator:
Changed the nose. Better this way?


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Erwin_Br

Nice hair, although it doesn't really stand out because the character's face is still untextured.

How did you model that hair, by the way? Is there a special technique?

--Erwin

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Quote from: Erwin_Br on Thu 23/12/2004 15:21:05
Nice hair, although it doesn't really stand out because the character's face is still untextured.

How did you model that hair, by the way? Is there a special technique?

--Erwin

I've made the hair the hard way and used splines for each hair and placed them by hand...
I know its's madness but well thats the way I did it...  :-[

Yes the textures aren't done yet and this will cost my much time to to them...


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Nacho

Sorry to be an arse and spoil all your effort... But it seems "textile" of "cottonish" for me...   :-[

I don't really know how to help, as I know nothing about 3-d design, but, if asked, I prefered the bald one.

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Are you guys ready? Let' s roll!

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Quote from: Farlander on Thu 23/12/2004 16:51:53
Sorry to be an arse and spoil all your effort... But it seems "textile" of "cottonish" for me...   :-[

I don't really know how to help, as I know nothing about 3-d design, but, if asked, I prefered the bald one.

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Hehe! Nothing to be sorry about! :) This is the Critics Lounge and its importent that everyone says its opinion about posted artworks.
I'm by myself aren't totally happy with the result and I'm working on changing it good to see that I'm not the onlyone who's not sadisfied with the result. :)

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Indie Boy

Im always setting myself new challanges and I was wondering what program did you use? because I just want to try it out.

Nice hair but the eyebrows look a bit funny
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Quote from: Potter on Thu 23/12/2004 19:18:25
Im always setting myself new challanges and I was wondering what program did you use? because I just want to try it out.

Nice hair but the eyebrows look a bit funny

Thats the spirit! Like myself allways out to search for new challanges! Well because of my job, I've access to 3DsMax V7. It's a great tool but exspencive...

Anyway there are many other tools that are free/or cheaper and can do most of the importent stuff you need to make a model like this one.

Well I will rework the hair again. Tomorrow I think...

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Al_Ninio

If you're willing to use a trial version of 3DSMax 7, you can get it at www.discreet.com

Evil

Yes, I hate to tell you but I prefer the bald version better also.

I'm not sure about the eyebrows. I understand they are supposed to be like that, just seems a little awkward.

The nostral balls are sharp. Like where the nostrals meet the face, it's not round.

I'd also shorten the mouth up a little bit, make the lips slightly bigger, and add in mouth dimples. Mouths have little holes on the ends when closed, and also have a little bit of a crease. You've got a bit of one on his right side. Exagerating this feature may make his mouth look 'older'.

Erwin_Br

I think his hairline ends too abrubtly, which is making the hair look... awkward. I'd try a different texture too.

--Erwin

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Quote from: Evil on Thu 23/12/2004 20:37:22
Yes, I hate to tell you but I prefer the bald version better also.

I'm not sure about the eyebrows. I understand they are supposed to be like that, just seems a little awkward.

The nostral balls are sharp. Like where the nostrals meet the face, it's not round.

I'd also shorten the mouth up a little bit, make the lips slightly bigger, and add in mouth dimples. Mouths have little holes on the ends when closed, and also have a little bit of a crease. You've got a bit of one on his right side. Exagerating this feature may make his mouth look 'older'.

Have changed most of the thing you didin't liked. Better this way? (See first post)

@Erwin_Br:
this model has no textures at all at moment. Just some simple lightening. (even the hair is just a model with no texture) I will make the textures as soon I'm done with modeling part.

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Evil

Yes, it looks much much better now.

With the the newly added lighting, the hair is beginning to grow on me (no pun intended).

But, as Erwin has said, the hair line does end too abrubtly, almost as if it's glued on. Maybe some shorter hairs may help fade the ends a bit.

Rather then waiting until the moddel is finished, I would try adding some texture. It may be more finished then you think.

Paper Carnival

yeah, it looks awesome now. His hair is maybe too long for an old guy, but it's ok if you intended it

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