Another short short story by me

[Harvester]

It's called The Perfect Murder. It's only one page long, and this is the unedited version. Well, read it or die!

http://a-janjic.freewebspace.com/murder.htm

Oh, yeah... Gonzo read the story and corrected some of the mistakes, but I'm too lazy to upload the new version yet.

[Quickstrike]

Bravo!  

[Minimi]

fun story!  

[Gregjazz]

Lol, that's so funny!

My comment: how about "How many cases like this one has he solved? As a matter of a fact, a little less than one" rather than your "He solved over zero cases just like this one"?

Anyways, good work!

[Peter Thomas]

haha! i found that funny for some reason (I mean REALLY funny. As in Laugh Out Loud kind of stuff). I know that it was meant to have SOME element of sardonic humour in it, but I might have been a little more zellous.

P.S Upload the new version NOW, my minion. I think I know the mistakes Gonzo would've pointed out, and it drives me NUTS to be reading this with the full knowledge that there's a perfect copy floating somewhere around your hard drive.... SO UPDATE NOW!  8)

Oh, one last thing... I'm really confused. What made anyone think that Douglason was the murderer. I mean really, come on. It's not like there was anything suspicious.....  

EDIT: On a more serious note, can I ask about the title of the story? Why was it the 'perfect' murder? Maybe I'm just missing something...

[Minimi]

whoahaha! Peter Thomas! Just take a look at the time of Harvester's posting?!! 18 April 2003

[veryweirdguy]

Then.............why did you bring it back from that period, Minimi?