Help with my character

[Dan2552]

i was wondering if anyone could help on a side-viewÃ,  i can't draw and i'm really amazed i got this one like it is


ps.

2. Post in a mature manner. Remember, the minimum age here is 16 - if you're unable to act that age, don't post.

I'm sure when i joined i agreed i was 13 or over. not 16Ã, 

[Haddas]

That'd be the minimum BEHAVIOUR age (I suppose). I'm over 16, and I swear people think I'm 6 .

[Privateer Puddin']

From the registration: '16 years is the preferred minimum age, but if you act maturely we accept anyone from 13-16 too.'

[..]

I'm only 13 so it doesnt matter. I think it is ilegal though to sign up when ure under that age without ure parents permission.

Anyway with the side view there are many ways to achive this. You could re draw his basic shape and then alter things like legs arms and facial features etc.

It would be nice if you could show us your effort for a sideview, then we can help

(Ps, Its alright to post posts like this in the critics lounge)

[Dart]

Yep, this should've been posted in the Critic's Lounge. After all, you are asking for help about drawing your character.

Well, here's my take on it:



I just basically cut the guy in half, added a nose, changed the hair at the back a bit, and added a stomach.

[Dan2552]

i didnt post it in the critics louge becuase it's not really for an AGS game and i didnt know if thats allowed


thanks dart, i'll try and use that and edit it and i'll post the edited here (if a Mod wants they can move this to critics)


EDIT:
I don't really think the hair matches.  can anyone help?

[HingedShinobi]

your right about the hair in the side view, those two pointy bits at the top, swap em around, maybe then it'll look better

[Evil]

Most of the stuff people post in the critics lounge isnt for a game. Its just a place to work on art in general.

[Dan2552]

ok.. what do you think about this hair?

[HingedShinobi]

yeah, that looks better

[Dan2552]

  i cant draw the last view i need





i need his right foot step.