Xperience - The virginal issue

[[Cameron]]

Finally. Well, seeing this is the first issue I'd appreaciate any crits and comments you have about the magazine.
http://www.sitesled.com/members/chronicles/Xperience.pdf

[jetxl]

Can anybody write something and send it to you?

[[Cameron]]

Yep. Anyone.

[big brother]

Not to sound overly harsh, but you should consider taking some writing classes before you appoint yourself editor of an eZine. I highly recommend reading Strunk and White's book, Elements of Style. It will teach you about the mechanics of grammar and the English language.
Another good book is Writing Fiction by Janet Burroway. She explores the construction of short stories and novels from character development to dialogue to description. Her approach is quite exaustive, and it's considered the definitive work on the subject by many university professors.

[pslocum]

I have a story in here. It is therefore automatically FANTASTICAL.

[Developer]

Love the theatre article.