New character - a teacher

[Dave Gilbert]

Finally got around to working on the 2nd part of BoE, and here's one of the first characters you meet.  She's a teacher at a nursery school.  I'm proud of myself because I actually did some shading.

[Nacho]

I really like it, it´s very "Gilbertish", so, even assuming that I would do her in a totally different way, for your style will work terrific.

Just... Add a darker colour in the inside part of the sleeve, and you could do more detail in the dress (Not the jacket...)

Edit: This has been my 1-minute edit... hope you don´t mind...

[Darth Mandarb]

I like the original and Far ... er Lance's edit.

The only thing that leaps out at me that I would crit would be the legs.  It looks like the right leg (back) is missing?  Like we should be seeing a little more of it.

Your shading wasn't bad at all!  I would have added a little more (hair, face, legs, etc) but it's a great start!

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[Domino]

i like this character. But one thing bothers me when shown up close. It looks like she has a nail or another pointed object coming out of her right hand. Maybe you could delete that extra line there. Without it, her hand would look perfect.

shawn

[PureGhostGR]

Great work Dave.. (and Farlander)

I like her.. She is very believable as a teacher. Especially her clothes & colors.

I also agree with BuffaloGamer about the extra pixel at the hand. But it depends oh the characters background. If the hand blends-in you will need the extra pixel, if not you might consider getting it out.

[Vel]

I think the legs are a bit wrong. Otherwise, great work, Dave.