C&C on a background: my room

InCreator · Thu 18/12/2003 10:24:53

I tried to make my room for a 640x480 game.
I know that perpsective went a little out of reality, but I'm still not sure should I keep it as it is, or make changes.
Any comments?

*edit:* I moved picture to a freewebs account. Possibly the problems between hot.ee server and people from other countries, people under estonian ISP-s claim they see everything right. This has bever happened before - because I'm a member for a long time and taken part of MsPaint game and so... no problems reported yet!
Still, a bit embarrasing and stupid case. My apologies and link *should* work now.

http://www.freewebs.com/increator/bground.gif

MrColossal · Thu 18/12/2003 10:27:43

i see nothing, try again increator

InCreator · Thu 18/12/2003 12:16:41

Probably because you posted less than 3 minutes after me (maybe pic was still uploading). It should work now, for me, it does.

Valzebnik · Thu 18/12/2003 12:25:38

Now this is some good s***!
Exlusive work,if I do say so myself!Great job...

Scummbuddy · Thu 18/12/2003 14:48:38

It worked fine for you InCreator, cause its cached on your computer.
I can't see it even if i just put in its address.

InCreator · Thu 18/12/2003 15:02:08

Very weird... doublechecked link and pic via ftp. everything *HAS* to be normal! Ok, I changed link to another... same server though, another account. Erased all history, cache... even cookies!
It does work.

jaz · Thu 18/12/2003 15:30:15

I donÂ´t see it as well....... :'(
I wanna see some exclusive s*** too, pretty please.

Maybe you could try to upload it to 2dadventures?

Isegrim · Thu 18/12/2003 22:01:48

Can it be that the server you loaded it upon is veeeery slow?

Hollister Man · Thu 18/12/2003 22:23:14

Could it be related to the fact that your avatar is also missing? The same icon appears in both.

Valzebnik · Fri 19/12/2003 08:18:33

Dont understand what is wrong with your computers guys.I see everything perfectly including the avatar!

cpage · Fri 19/12/2003 10:55:39

click and drag the address into the address bar it will work

edit ehh screw it!!!
here to all you too lazy to figure it out

I love it! you are a really talented individual!
the reason no one else can see your stuff is probably cause your host doesnt allow remote linking.
I'm sure someone will come by and tell you about that whole annonymizer jobee

n3tgraph · Fri 19/12/2003 11:49:36

very nice bg

but try to stay in the same style
your computer for example is blurry while the rest is pixelly, i'd prefer the pixel view, so

for the rest no comment
great job

Hollister Man · Fri 19/12/2003 15:08:13

Excellent work. It actually reminds me of a REALLY old h-game I played a while ago.

C+C: Do fix the computer scree, it is a little too fuzzy. The back of the "box"for it is a little undefined as well.

LordHart · Fri 19/12/2003 15:59:58

InCreator: The reason no-one but you could see it is because Freewebs allows you to see it for up to 30 minutes with hotlinking whenever you've logged in. No one else would be able to see it, except you.

I did this once and wondered why the image turned into a big red X the next time I viewed it.

But anyway, nice background. I really like the detail you've put into everything, but I think something should be outside the window. It seems like your room is 100 floors up, and you can't see any horizon, ground, other buildings or even clouds.

That and also what N3TGraph said about the computer are the only problems I have with it.

Hollister Man: h-game? Hentai? Reminds me of May Club... or maybe 3SS or SOTS.

InCreator · Fri 19/12/2003 20:40:39

Thanks to cpage for helping out. Actually, I moved it to freewebs after my estonian most popular free web servers accounts at zone.ee and hot.ee failed to show the picture, which is very weird, and has never happened before.
Another, and even weirder thing is that Valzebnik managed to see the picture on his computer (he has different ISP). He's from Estonia,too, (and he's not myself, if someone happened to think i would sink that low) - he's a friend of mine and I'm teaching him drawing. He made a background too, today, posted here, and is having same problem! Wonder what happened with estonian free-web-servers... but It's sure I need a new space for my files and surely not estonian one. What was this advice about 2dadventures again?

Hollister Man · Sun 21/12/2003 16:40:22

Yea, I wasn't sure if anyone would know what I meant. It reminded me a little of True Love. Anyway.....

SilverHawke · Mon 12/01/2004 01:06:11

Perhaps it is just me.. but the left wall appears to be out of perspective. The artwork looks excellent.. but something about the whole left wall feels off and disproportionate.

Penguinx · Fri 16/01/2004 16:40:23

To me, it looks as though the left wall's top and bottom lines are getting smaller as they converge on the vanishing point (and rightly so).

However, the window seems to get larger as it travels towards the vanishing point. I think this is compounded by the contrast of the grey lines on the computer and the really dark, totally black lines of the window.

In essence, the window looks like it's jumping out at you.

I really like the drawing, and aside from my anal nitpicks, I think it's perfect.

InCreator · Fri 16/01/2004 23:42:38

Hehe - this window IS a bit out of perspective. Not because, I didn't pay attention, but because *IT IS*.
See, I live In Estonia, Tallinn. In a part of city named LasnamÃ¤gi, which local people call "concrete jungle".
This was built at the start of 90's just before USSR broke, to get some apartments for flooding immigration so there's really fast built 9-floor concrete condos here, and building quality is pretty low. Okay, on my pic the window is a bit wrong angled but I've seen ones which are excactly like that! And my own window... well, I can never close the little part of window properly - just because of same thing > it's badly placed!