Character Design

Started by Bugalicious, Wed 14/01/2004 15:15:03

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Bugalicious

Hey i was wondering what people think of this:

Im not quite sure about the shading coz i aint that good at that. so any advice your be great
-Thanks
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HillBilly

#1
Just surf around on the board and check out diffrent characters. You'll learn it fast.


Oh yeah, that character looks great. Maybe add a sho?

TheYak

I think the character's rather good. A little touching up here and there but the overall look is nice & fluid.  It's got a dynamic quality that makes it fairly life-life.  The thing that detracts from it currently (for me) is the pair of pants.  They follow the contours of the leg over-much, giving it the look of stretch-pants.  If you loosen up some of the inward curves, give it a slightly straighter line & maybe throw in some details like the lines on a pair of jeans (or slacks or whatever), it should improve the look of 'em.

Gregjazz

Don't really worry about shading if you're going for a 'cartoon look'. All you need is a little (not too much, mind you) anti-aliasing on the edges of the colors.

Bugalicious


Thanks for your comments. I made a couple changes but while doing so i realised how crap i am at shoes, so i left them out(going for that trousers covering shoes look). added some pocket lines, a belt and made it so both legs were shown. Also changed it to Be-bop coz me mate rekons punk isnt dead. which it probably isnt.
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Minimi

bebob ain't dead!!! Change it to "Bleus Ares teh Dead!"

Nice character! Please show me the shoes, because i dont think you can mess much up on the shoes :s

TheYak

Agreed.  Until it's explained, I would assume that the character lost his feet in Vietnam or something.  I think the best bet (if you really wanna avoid getting messed up by shoes) is to just have the sole showing a bit, just a few pixels to show that something shoe-like is sticking out of the pants would be good.  

loominous

Some modifications:



Hope it s selfexplanatory.
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Nine Toes

Quote from: Minimi on Thu 15/01/2004 16:42:11
bebob ain't dead!!! Change it to "Bleus Ares teh Dead!"

Blues isn't dead... oh well, as long as you don't put "Metal Is Dead" I dont' have to murderlize you.  ;D

Not a bad sprite, chap.
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earlwood

I don't know if the big trousers thing will work in a character with so few colors, you can try to go around it but It will be harder, Make the end of the pants tatered and ripped and make lines and stuff where the ends of the shoes are pressing agianst it.


I wish bebop died.  :-\

Ben

Loom: I like the shading in your edit, but I think you made his head too small. He looks like he had a run-in with a witch-doctor  ;)

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