More crazy characters to critic

[Morgan]

I want C&C on the characters themselves more than the drawings. The drawings could change because they arent really similar in style to my other characters.

The one on the left is Candy Rapper. He is a famous rap singer who raps out the ingredients on the back of various candy products. "Yo Candy does that contain peanut tracings!" "Yo man you know it made in the same factory as peanut M&Ms!"
The man on the right is a small fireman. Hes not called that because of his size its because he only fights small fires like trash can fires or a cigarette thats not completely out. He believes that only when you dedicate yourself to one size fire can you truly take on that fire with full force. Its like doctors who specialize in certain fields such as brain surgery. You wouldnt want a doctor who knows a little about a lot of different procedures doing a face transplant on you, you would wont a specialist, right?

By the way I changed my name from morgan to MEGATRON.

[Tarison]

The wrapper is cool, but looks more like a headless eminem, which could also be cool. The fireman looks as though his legs stopped growing at age 10, and might possibly be wearing a skirt -- funny angle doesn't help.

You also need more definition in the face, perhaps use colours that aren't as similar to each other, so the jaw can be seen easier (though it depends on how that will look).

[jason]

Megatron: that fireman idea is brilliant and I love his little spray bottle! I could totally imagine him as a character in a game: melodramatic, always coming to the "rescue"... lol, put him in a game please!

[Phemar]

If the rappers arms are a light skin color, ehy is his head a dark skin color?

Jus' some thoughts...

.:Zor:.

[Haddas]

Don't you see the rapper IS a candybar?!?