Just Another Character For You To C&C!

[DoorKnobHandle]

Hi guys,

please give me your C&C for this new character I drew.


300x280


60x55

EDIT: The shade is still missing. I will care about it soon, I think/hope.

Thank you!

[Nacho]

We (at least me) can't criticise really if you don't explain something about the character, personality, age, its role in the plot... Tell me something about him and I'll do my best to tell you how can you improve it.  

[MrColossal]

i like the lines in the face and you could get away without shading by just having those lines, however why is the back of his head bald like that? is this a part of his character or are you just not finished?

and why the 60x55 version? if that's how big it would be in game

[DoorKnobHandle]

First off -> sorry for my late reply but I was 'busy' at the weekend...

So... This character is not used in any game at the moment.. It has just been an exercise for me to gain experience.

For me it looks like a 45 years old, little weird, freaky either prof or farmer, which is living alone and some kind of anti-hero...

[Valzebnik]

You could try doing him a body.There are many ways for doing a personality.Short fat = grumpy (so he doesnt need the hair on his backside of the head).
Tall thin = he might have a ponytail.
Well anyway,the face is nice.Yeah,maybe a little shading would help