Alfred Brugenmier Char

Moox · Wed 19/05/2004 03:30:53

This is Alfred Brugenmier, the evil german spy.

Advice and edits welcome. This game takes place in late 1800s early 1900's

loominous · Wed 19/05/2004 05:20:14

Some modifications:

x1

(i) Altered hairline. Less linear to make it more realistic, and higher to make him appear more cerebral.

(ii) Changed clothes to make him more gentleman like. This would depend on his mission I guess, so if he's infiltrating a ship, yours would be more believeable.

(iii) Raised crotch to make legs longer. Longer legs are more realistic, however if you want to go for a very cartoony style, shorter legs would be preferable.

(iv) Lowered eyelids. This makes him look more wily than sinister, which I think is more characteristic for a spy.

Really nice style btw. Very NES like.

ElectricMonk · Wed 19/05/2004 07:10:23

Quote
This is Alfred Brugenmier, the evil german spy.

Advice and edits welcome.

Name him Brugenmeier, Brugenmeyer or Brugenmayer. "-mier" is not a surname ending you'll usually find in Germany. And I'm not sure about "Brugen", either, but at least it sounds plausible...

Kweepa · Wed 19/05/2004 08:11:29

loominous's edits are almost perfect - I'd leave the original hands though for that lego look (like the main character has).

Monky, what about Alfred? Hmm, I guess that is German. It doesn't sound clichÃ©d enough for me though.

googlebox · Wed 19/05/2004 11:32:55

I'd go with Dieter, that's the name of all guys in my german book from school.

- Hallo Dieter wie gehts!
- Es geht gut, aber do hast nicht meine ZauberflÃ¶te gehÃ¶ren!
...

Thats all I remember...

Sorry to go offtopic. I really like the edits.

/googlebox

Phemar · Wed 19/05/2004 12:55:20

Dude, my name's Dieter. Really, it is.

I'm not German, though.

By the way, I like loomys edit.

ElectricMonk · Wed 19/05/2004 14:35:05

Quote
Monky, what about Alfred? Hmm, I guess that is German. It doesn't sound clichÃ©d enough for me though.

As long as it's not one more Adolf, I don't care.

Googlebox: Dieter, now there's a clichÃ©d name... no idea why it is used so often. Welcome to Sprockets, touch my monkey. Willkommen in Royston Vasey, alles klar?

Moox · Wed 19/05/2004 21:49:14

Thanx to all of you, its now Alfred Brugenmeier. Loom I edited your edit and got this:

he is beside the detective Petri in this pic

Darth Mandarb · Thu 20/05/2004 03:11:45

Let me just say I like the look of this.

I've seen some of the backgrounds haven't I? Didn't you post some BGs for this game?

Anyway ... I look forward to this!

Moox · Thu 20/05/2004 03:14:29

yep, you have, look at my thread in games in production for more info