my first character - c&c and help needed

[Phemar]

It's when his legs do the

  0
 /|\
  |>    <-bend like that

and when his leg looks like

   0
  /|\
 _/ \_   <--don't point the feet

[viktor]

Obviously this walkcycle is getting much better...the thing that's bothering me is that it rather looks like a runcycle...So I opened the animation in imageready, changed the frame interval to 0.2 and it still looked like a runcycle...Though I have no clue why, since you did a paintover on Erics tutorial....which doesn't look like a  running person at all....

The reason may be that the character does not bend his knee when he steps forward. MAYBEE. I'm just a newbee so...
But one other thing i noticed is that he kinda steps to far when he walks (usualy you step further when you run than when you walk)

[poe]

as Viktor mentioned the character steps too far when he walks and this creates the impression of running... it took me a lot of time to get this new animation but I think here you can see more of a "real" walking effect:



the arms aren't swinging so much and the step is shorter (I changed 4 frames) - so what do you think of it? (one arm is missing, will be added later on)

[Daz]

i think it is a nice smooth walk cycle but his arm whips back when it comes back infront of him, if you see what i mean?

[poe]

I know what you mean, it's probably in frame 5 where the arm is completely stretched. Maybe it should be more like the last frame... thanks!

[Phemar]

Ah, I see you took my advice, you Padiwan. Good work, and may the forces be with you...