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[Tardmaster]

wt do u guyz tink of mi kewl game??

lok@dis adres........................................

itz only a stori bt its beta thn nuffin...

once upn a tyme a dooode wnt srfin and fell off.and gt gobbled up bi weeee lil bby fshyies n dieed frm coldnessz;
thts al iv gt so far ppl hook us up wif da info on ur forts on mi nw game planzz
shoties!ssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!111!!!1!1!!!111!!!!!1!!!1!!!

~~~~~~~~~~TaRd~MaRsTeR~~~~~~~~~~

[Raider]

I think some of you guys are going to have a field day with this guy.
If it is a joke it's not funny. If it's not I think the story needs more depth.

- Raider

[Tardmaster]

i wz finkin of putin in sharkieez bt dnt u gyz fink itz 2 voilent??////??/?/??/??
shotisessss!!!11!!!!!

~~~~ TaRdMaStA~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[veryweirdguy]

Call me crazy, but wouldn't the eating of him kill him, rather than the coldness?

And.....where would the game go from there? What happens after that? What is the player's objective? Where is he going in life?

Just a few things to think about.

[Flippy_D]

Don't humour it, it's a joke account.

[veryweirdguy]

'twas what I suspected, but still, better to be safe than looking-like-a-jackass-when-it-turns-out-not-to-be

[Moox]

o come on, my mom teaches 6th grade ec, even they can type better then that. This guy is either playing a stupid joke, or is more drugged up then alice in wonderland.

[Mr Flibble]

Well, his name says it all, doesn't it?
TardMaster.
From here we go to
"REtardmaster".

Losing the "master" is optional.

And yeah, joke account. (see tech forum).
I'm not a mod ( I pray for the day) but would a banning be to harsh?

And what happened to the text filter?