3D Rayman-esque character (more pictures)

Started by AlphaMole, Wed 08/12/2004 18:15:56

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AlphaMole

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Name: Bigby
Game: "Bigby and the machine"
Notes:
*Is a repair 'bot' for an alien machine that crash landed to earth.
*The style is still in flux, but there will be the black outlines seen in this model around most objects, the texture detail is to be determined.

I posted this image to my local game developers fourm, but was unable to garner any comments, let alone criticisms. I was hoping that this great community would be able to tell me what's wrong/right with this. PLEASE dont spare any punches.
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Bombadil

I really like it.
Maybe you should post some more pics because its a 3D character to see how it looks.

Babar

It is kind of hard commenting on it, considering that it is so empty. Perhaps you could add some details to the head....camera lense and microphone?
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AlphaMole

well, the original design for the head was something like this, tall fairly unexpressive eyes.(though the magic of photoshop)

I would liketo keep a kinda luckless innocence in his face, because he's always going to get smashed into a pulp.

hm, I did just recently make him a type of robot though, perhaps if he had a jonny 5 face, that might be pretty neat
"this is the worst thing I have ever tasted" *munch*
"then why are you still eating it?!"
..."It's in my hand"

MoodyBlues

Limblessness... ah, right down my alley  ;D

He looks pretty good so far; nice job on the folds in the gloves and shoes.  Using black outlines is a good idea, too.

However, I think his torso looks a bit feminine - a little too small and curvy.  His wingspan could be a bit shorter, too.

Do you plan on adding textures to this guy?  I'd like to see that :)
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AlphaMole

been offline for chrismas, but ive got some more to show on it now.
no textures as of yet though
"this is the worst thing I have ever tasted" *munch*
"then why are you still eating it?!"
..."It's in my hand"

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