New Bad Timing character [updated!]

[strazer]

I believe it's a characterisation who would suit a police officer perfectly

I completely agree. It works great for this character.

[Erwin_Br]

New: a front view.Ã, 



Thanks for all your comments so far!

EDIT: Oops, I see I need to make his shoes a little larger in the front view.

--Erwin

[strazer]

I think it should be the other other way around, smaller head, wider neck. I would also make his jaw wider.
Also, the chest area and the belly to a some extent should be a bit smaller to let you see the arms better. He seems to lack shoulders.
And yeah, the shoes should be a bit bigger and point more forwards.

[Krazy]

The head bobbing is a function most walking people utilize, however: not everyone! I had a neighbour once, who walked excatly like this guy here, and it was always a faboulous sight! It shows off a certain kind of pride and attitude, and I believe it's a characterisation who would suit a police officer perfectly (my neighbour was a farmer btw, but he had an incredible amount of sheep) - it would also apply to a lot of security guards, decorated military personell and so on. All these probably have a hurting neck after a good days work walking around in their pride posture, but that's the flipside they are prepared to live with.

I think he's perfect.

Then why does Brett walk like it too?

[Mr_Frisby]

The Chin definately needs to be wider at thte bottom and then taper in. The rest looks fairly good.

[Bombadil]

It looks great.
a few things that bother me:
- the chin
- the hands' postion differ in one view than another, that looks a bit weird, but if it's not the player character I would not bother about it.
- maybe the arms should show a little bit more