a couple of characters for c+c

Started by He-Man, Thu 31/03/2005 18:59:40

Previous topic - Next topic

He-Man

Hello
It's been a while since I last wrote something in this forum, mostly because I haven't had the time.
Well, while being bored the other day in school I drew a couple of characters, so I thought it would be funny to convert them into adventure game characters (maybe for later use in a game):

Ã,  Ã, andÃ,  Ã, 
Ã,  Ã,  Ã, A punkÃ,  Ã, Ã,  andÃ,  Ã, a drunk student

What do you think about them?


Arboris

#1
Nice style you got there. Altho the noses look a bit weird :)

The thing that bugs me tho is the punkers left shoulder (right from our point of view) is longer then his right.

Also, is the arm of the drunk guy supposed to be that long ? He can actually touch the ground without bending over
 
Concept shooter. Demo version 1.05

Ubel

Indeed a nice style!

Quote from: ArboriS on Thu 31/03/2005 21:01:15
Altho the noses look a bit weird :)

I love the way they are drawn ;D

Just one thing: Is it just me or does the punk guys upper body point to different direction than his legs? Cause it looks a bit weird.

stuh505

I think he needs some viagara :o

Reptile

(Signature removed due to violation of image size rules).

Ozzie

i think it looks great and unique, like the awry noses, and wouldn't change anything except the thing with the shoulders of the punk and how his upper body behaves to his legs, it really looks weird.
Robot Porno,   Uh   Uh!

InCreator

#6
Hm.
I, personally hate the nose style. It's a matter of taste, but they just irritate me too much.

But everything else -- as masterful as can be!
Color choice and usage especially.

Only thing I could suggest is to take it more easy on lines and curves -- they're way too straight! More rounded lines and shapes should fit way better to your cartoony style.
Same goes to body poses: they're like soliders standing still (the second one too, but a drunk solider :D). Why not spread legs a bit, lower shoulders, unstraighten(word?) the backs and stand "cool", not so stiff.

Edit: also, noticed that punk's boots are weird. I understand that you tried to make it to look like there's ironed part or something, but they look like there's slippers worn ON boots.
Try to add back part too, and add little nails into it, so it would look better.

SMF spam blocked by CleanTalk