Zorg (comments and Critiques)

Crook836 · Sat 24/02/2007 21:19:03

Hi guys, been a while for me.Ã,Â Anywho, I'm thinking of starting a light, sci-fi-ish comedy, like space quest but meaner.Ã,Â Ã,Â

Anywho, this is the protagonist for the game, Zorg.

EDIT:Ã,Â The new version, with the old

I'm just starting on a walk cycle. What you guys think, loveable enough (that's what I'm going for.)

EDIT:
As for the skinny legs and tight pants, it's supposed to be that way.Ã,Â That's alien fashion.

ThreeOhFour · Sun 25/02/2007 05:08:58

Kinda wacky, but I like it. His shoe on the right (on his left foot) looks a bit strange. His left leg also looks a little funny. Other than that, it is cool.

accolyte · Mon 26/02/2007 19:04:25

Heh, i really like this character. He looks great. Good luck with your game.

Jon · Mon 26/02/2007 19:27:05

Quote from: Ben304 on Sun 25/02/2007 05:08:58
His shoe on the right (on his left foot) looks a bit strange. His left leg also looks a little funny.

I agree with Ben, my only other suggestion would be that his legs seem too skinny, so try to widen up the trousers, that is, unless you are trying to go for those trousers like this here

thewalrus · Mon 26/02/2007 19:27:18

Nice sprite, dude!!!

Crook836 · Thu 01/03/2007 23:35:07

Here's the new Zorg, much more cartoony and easy on the eyes. This is also my first major leap into Paintshop, and I think it's pretty good.

PS: Also put one up top for comparison

Stupot · Thu 01/03/2007 23:42:58

Wicked, man. I can't see a problem with that. I'd like to see him from several angles and in a walkcycle, too.

ThreeOhFour · Mon 05/03/2007 08:29:14

I actually preferred the crisper lines on your first one.

But that's probably me just being silly.

cat · Mon 05/03/2007 08:36:20

If you are going for loveable, the first one was better. Your second character looks somewhat angry.