Poem - I used to love you

[Buckethead]

I wrote this poem today. Since I rarely write any I just though I could post it here so everyone can tell me what they think of it. Ok here it is:

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I used to love you

But things got way out of hand.
Now I have these feelings,
problems I can't stand.

I used to love of you

But now the nightmare has begun,
It faints like water
under the burning sun.
I think I can't handle it.
It's just no fun.

I feel like I've been drinking,
and you were the alcohol.
Now I have the hang-over
and feel terrible.

I used to love you

Now I just feel a pain.
I kinda wonder,
if you feel the same.
Do you really care,
or is it just a game.

I used to love you

You started as a friend
but things started to change.
Now in the farest end.
You became a monster,
a figure I can't stand.

I used to love you

But I don't quite understand.
If everthing was meant
and god had it all planned.
Then why this love had to end?

I used to love you

But I guess I have to say goodbye.
I'll never understand why,
but I'll have to try.

Even if all this makes my cry.
I could always think of you,
Because thoughts never lie.

[Evil]

It's pretty cheesy and typical of poems. Nothing left to the imagination. No real story behind it. Most of the lines aren't delivered very well, and it all seems kind of rushed together.  However I liked the lines "It faints like water" and "Because thoughts never lie."