Old character remake

Started by vict0r, Sun 20/05/2007 14:36:05

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vict0r

Hey people!
I'm trying to make a low-res version of this old char I made.







I'm not trying to make him excactly like the high-res version, but make him look like the same person at least, and now there's something bugging me about him that I can't quite put my finger on!

Tuomas

you do know that they're both pretty low res. However, the new one not so wide shoulders, and I suppose he's hanging his pants because the crotch seems to be very low. Also he seems to be very uncomfortable, leaning backwards.

space boy

Your lowres guy looks like the hires guy before he started lifting weights.

Here's my version





gASK

I will say what has been said by those before - the remake looks less muscular. Plus he has smaller head and the overall appearance (dressing style etc) make him look like a teenager whilst the older version looks...well...older:)

Khris


vict0r

Thanks for the crits people!
Sorry for not responding earlier. Been abit busy at school.




So what do you think about him now? I've tried to make him look more muscular, but what do you think? :)

Jon

If your trying to make him more muscular, than increase the left arm or decrease the right arm; as the right bicep is almost twice as long! I would also advise increasing the width of the whole arms.

space boy

Jon is right about the left biceps. You should make it shorter because now it looks like the biceps ends at the wrist(I know I made the same mistake in my edit but I just noticed it now). The width of the arms looks ok to me though.

vict0r

You are absolutely right! :P It looks really weird when you mention it..



Cleaned up some things here and there. Better? Worse?

space boy

I liked the previous one better(except for the biceps of course). It had a more solid stance. I would advise going back to that one and just fixing the arm.

ThreeOhFour

I had a quick play around with it:



Is looking good.

vict0r

Thanks for crits everyone!



Okay! Moved the arm back out. Made his chest seem more muscular. How is it now? :)

space boy

If you ask me, it looks great the way it is now. Nothing more to crit.

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