Logo - Banner and Co

Started by yarooze, Mon 02/07/2007 01:38:11

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yarooze

Hi!

I'm working on the logo/banner for my game. It isn't ready and I need some critic.
What do you think about the font?
Can you read it?

Banner 100x48 pix

Yarooze
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Evil

I love the look of it, but it's very hard to read. Style's great though!

TerranRich

At first, I had a hard time distinguishing the Q. I finally realized it was lowercase, but something about that Q still doesn't look right.

Other than that, it's a great logo!
Status: Trying to come up with some ideas...

ManicMatt



Quick messy edit. Like TerranRich said, the q isn't right. Hows this?

yarooze

Thanx pals!  ;)

Is there only the problem with "Q"?

Since I'm not a native english speaker, it is very difficult for me to see, if it is possible to read this text...  :-[

I'll try to remake the logo...
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LimpingFish

A quick attempt by me. A slighty different angle.

Steam: LimpingFish
PSN: LFishRoller
XB: TheActualLimpingFish
Spotify: LimpingFish

Mad

I see LimpingFish beat me to the chase with a simular idea.
But I tried to keep it as close to your style as possible.

So here it goes:



Tried to make all the letters more readable and of simular weight!

Hudders

The Q definitely needs to be uppercase, otherwise it's near impossible to read.

yarooze

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LimpingFish

The Q is better, but now the N looks a little like a H. Overall though, it has better balance. Just tweak the N a little, and it will look fine.
Steam: LimpingFish
PSN: LFishRoller
XB: TheActualLimpingFish
Spotify: LimpingFish

markbilly

I agree, but you seem to have acquired a smudge that needs to be dealt with, it looked better with cleaner edges.
 

Hudders

The Q is definitely much better. So is the T.

But unless it's called HecroQuest, that N needs fixing.

monkey0506

Hmmm...finally someone who shares my necrophagic...necrophilic...?...tendencies...mmmmm... ;D

Yes, yes, just change the H back to an N, clean up the edges some...maybe make it a bit sharper...and it will be just fine.

TerranRich

I read that as "HeroQuest" at first, and had an urge to play Quest for Glory ;)

Yeah, what others said, fix the N, and otherwise it looks perfect!
Status: Trying to come up with some ideas...

yarooze

Ok, I'll try once more...  ;)

Quote from: monkey_05_06 on Wed 04/07/2007 02:36:30
Hmmm...finally someone who shares my necrophagic...necrophilic...?...tendencies...mmmmm... ;D

It is called "necromancy".  ;) I hope, we prefer live girls...  ::)

At all this thread is not about dead girls, but about this game:
http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=30016.0


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monkey0506

Yes but you wouldn't say "necromancy tendencies". It's not the proper form of the word. In any case...Dictionary.com registers necrophilic as a word, but not necrophagic so the latter is probably wrong. I just prefer the term necrophage over necrophiliac (which both mean the same thing). Actually...now I'm not even sure where I came up with "necrophage". There's necrophile and necrophiliac...but I can't seem to find any record of where I came up with necrophage. I was probably just trying to make myself sound more magical by making it rhyme with mage.

Anyway, enough linguistics. Yes, I prefer live girls...but is it really so wrong if I find the dead ones just as beautiful?....covered in fresh blood. :o

Hmmm....inside jokes are fun.

TerranRich

Wouldn't it be "necrophile"? Or is too close to "pedophile/paedophile"?

Either way, what I said above. :P
Status: Trying to come up with some ideas...

Hudders

Necromantic tendencies, surely?

yarooze

I've changed the "N".
Better?




PS. I just wonder, why about every thread I start, ends whith with boobs? ??? This time with **philie...  ;)

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monkey0506

It's not our fault surely. You must just be some sort of pervert. ;D

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