I'm interested in a second opinion...

[mouthuvmine]

Edit: I was simply wondering if anyone might be interested in helping me by reading through the story for my game. It's a fairly light read, and I  really would just like an opinion on it beyond my own. Thanks! PM me if you're interested.

[LUniqueDan]

So you need an Alpha /Betatester finally?

[mouthuvmine]

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[TerranRich]

Alpha is in-house testing. Beta is user testing. IIRC

But if there's no game, then isn't it just getting a second opinion?

[mouthuvmine]

Yeah, I was being a bit of a smart ass, which sucks, because it doesn't translate well to type. When it dosn't come off as litteral, it comes of as mean, and I was trying to be neither.

Thanks by the way. I couldn't think of the term second opinion. That would've made the original post a little more intelligable.

Yes. I'm looking for a second opinion.

[ildu]

Sure, as long as you don't need long commentaries on it. How much have you got? A synopsis? A full puzzle and story layout? A novel?

PM me if you're interested. I'm not the pleading type, especially when I'm doing the work .