Laundry Day... Or first game anouncement from a "noob"

[Ogre]

I'm not really a noob...

I used to post here a lot, and was working on a couple of games that never got finished(I'll spare you the details.)

So I decided to not post on here again till I was almost finished with a game... so here I am with...

LAUNDRY DAY

Simple little short-ish game... about a guy who has to get his laundry done in time for his date.

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Everything is done, the game is playable and beatable... I am just adding in all those little you can't do this or that statements... and correcting some walkable areas and wording/spelling as I am going.

Would love any kind of feedback...

it's good to be back.

[neon]

Either the rooms are very large or the doors, objects and characters are very small.

The bed has a wrong perspective. It fits to the side wall, but not to the back wall. Also the little table and the washing machines. They are all equal, but they don't fit the rooms perspective. For easy correction, you could mirror the three machines on the right side.

The signs on the walls are as big as the doors. And what is it on the second screen on the right wall? A window or a picture? It's very small for a window, compared with the wall and the perspective is also wrong. The upper and lower edge are both running parallel to the bed.

But I like the characters. The picture of Chris is also nice.

[Alarconte]

Well, I think this isn't Critics Lounge xD

Your statements are obvius xD

The only thing I can say "bad" to Ogre (good nick, and is unocuppied! xD) is if the game is in 640x480, if is really need all that resolution for the graphs he made.

Anyway, I love this graphs, they're SO CUTE xD I suposse this is a attempt of your to make with the AGS and release something, to see if your capable, not?

I will play it ^^

But maybe, the next time, come to the critics lounge and we can do some chit chat of styles!

Luck!

[Ogre]

I don't mind the criticism at all... It was pretty constructive.

Anyways, yes, it's just a short little game to really just let me say I have completed somthing... the resolution of the game is 320X200 I just blew up the images so they could be seen easier.

The thing on the side of the wall is a coin collection case.  I know a lot of the perspective are wrong and the rooms are huge... but I just wanted to get something out there.

Well... It's done now... I just need to get it hosted. My brother has some webspace.. I'll let you know when you can download it.

[Ogre]

I intentionally put the graphics as a sort of high color KQ1 style... I needed to keep it simple to do the animations... turns out that's not my forte.