Riff song

[Danman]

I just got fruit loops and I have tried to make a song for my game. and i would like some criticism on it. This is the first song i ever made so it is very basic.
But it is very catchy.  it is only 44 seconds Long. This song will be my Start screen song.

http://www.fileupyours.com/files/270827/Riff%20Song.mp3
http://www.fileupyours.com/files/270827/Riff%20Song.flp

So please criticize maybe I should make the song more complex and longer.

[Danman]

I made another song that's a lot better that reminds me of Leisure suit Larry 3.
So anybody have any criticism for it??   . It is very short 22 seconds.
http://www.fileupyours.com/files/270827/Song%202%20Nicew%20feel.mp3

[Dualnames]

I don't know about the first, and to be honest, I find it rather dull as a melody. The second one however has a really good sound style!

[Danman]

Thanks yea after I made that first song and listened to it the day after I posted. (Which i posted at like midnight) . I realized that song was rather dull thanks for confirming that. I am going delete the first one. And keep the second one.
I just made another one for my first game's remake. Which is a party song for a night club. I will make it longer but I would to know if this a good style.

http://www.fileupyours.com/view/270827/Party%20Song%20for%20episode%201.mp3

[MrCheminee]

Thanks yea after I made that first song and listened to it the day after I posted. (Which i posted at like midnight) . I realized that song was rather dull thanks for confirming that. I am going delete the first one. And keep the second one.
I just made another one for my first game's remake. Which is a party song for a night club. I will make it longer but I would to know if this a good style.

http://www.fileupyours.com/view/270827/Party%20Song%20for%20episode%201.mp3

If this is for a nightclub, I would make it danceble. Beats might be distracting for a normal gamesong, but in a danceclub you could use at least a simple beat. It's also good to use more than one layer like this: http://www.fileupyours.com/view/271949/partysong.mp3

(Used your song and build something around it. Of course this is not finished, but it's the idea...)

Edit: Or something like this?
http://www.fileupyours.com/view/271949/probeersel.mp3

[Danman]

MrCheminee your versions sound great. Mine are too basic which I did know. What program did you use to make that?? I used fruit loops (Which is a bit too complicated for me).
I am still learning how to use the program. Thanks for helping I realize I need to add more layers to it.  .

[MrCheminee]

I also use Fruityloops...
Remember, music gets interesting when it's using more layers, though you can create certain moods with just solos. I usually start with creating the melody, than I add a fitting bassline and from there I build further. I started a topic about the game that I am working on and I also posted a track I will be using for that game.