What do you guys think (Work in progress character)

Started by nads, Thu 21/06/2012 19:07:11

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nads

Heya,

Just wanted to get your opinions on this lil guy here. I've got to had some more stuff on him like pouches on his belts. But just wanted to get your views on how his looking. I'll post an update version when his finished.

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EDIT : Plus anyone know of any tips on how I could go about animating him, whats the best way to go about it?

Anian

Aah, Mr. Snake.  :smiley:

Maybe leg on the left is a bit too thin in the boot area, also it seems (I could be wrong though) the pelvic area is bit too big/long and the fist on the right is a bit too tiny. You might want to try just a bit more contrast among the colors on his face.

About animating, there are a few software solutions available, check the sticky topics at the top of the Critics lounge part of the forum for suggestions, there are also tutorials for walk cycles etc.
If you have or can make a stick figure (like foot, lower leg, upper leg etc.) of your drawing then animate the stick figure and then draw over that.
I don't want the world, I just want your half

Tramponline

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Awesome sprite!

Only the proportion of the central torso area seems a tad off :
- Maybe try to lower the waist line somewhat. I think this will also fix the pelvis/crotch area issue that Anian was refering to.
- You could extend his breast muscles a bit further down.

Other than that, Anian already mentioned contrast, love it!   

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