I'M NOT HERE -=|| UPDATE Nº9 ||=- WALKING PROTOTYPE CHARACTERS FACE DESING

[Rocchinator]

Pretty!

Looks great, good job!

thanks cassie for the advise on the BG it was really helpfull!

Thanks everyone for the nice words really apreciate it.

edit by darth - double post combined again... please stop double-posting.

[Rocchinator]

-------------------UPDATE Nº9 ------ WALKING PROTOTYPE AND CHARACTERS FACE DESING

THIS SHOES ARE MADE FOR WALKING

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DOCTOR DANTE

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LUCAS PARAX

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EMMET

[imgzoom]http://i64.tinypic.com/9ucbvd.png[/imgzoom]

[Danvzare]

I love that walk cycle. It has a sort of (probably unintentional) goofiness that I like. It gives personalitiy to the character and goes well with the artstyle.
The portraits are a little scary though.

[Blondbraid]

I love that walk cycle. It has a sort of (probably unintentional) goofiness that I like. It gives personalitiy to the character and goes well with the artstyle.
The portraits are a little scary though.

Yes, I agree with that.
The portrait expressions seem slightly weird in a frowny sort of way,
and the last guy's lips look a bit white for my taste.

The walking animation is nice, he looks like he's in a bit of a hurry!

[AnasAbdin]

I like the characters
I wanted to comment on the walk cycle but this is not Critics' Lounge (don't want to upset Darth!)

[Rocchinator]

I love that walk cycle. It has a sort of (probably unintentional) goofiness that I like. It gives personalitiy to the character and goes well with the artstyle.
The portraits are a little scary though.

Yes, I agree with that.
The portrait expressions seem slightly weird in a frowny sort of way,
and the last guy's lips look a bit white for my taste.

The walking animation is nice, he looks like he's in a bit of a hurry!

Thanks everyone for the kind words, and thanks for the advice about the character face desing, i will correct the expressions. Everything to make the game more atractive

[Kumpel]

Some small comment about the walk cycle (maybe you should start a critic's lounge thread for this game, so Darth wouldn't get mad):
Instead of letting the characters mass centre differ on the x-axis (he moves left and right in the gif), you should try letting him differ on the y-axis. This way the walk looks more realistic. There is some characteristic walk cycle head movement you can find in every walk cycle tutorial. Maybe check them out.

B2T: This seems to come a long nicely! Any infos on the expected game length or the amount of rooms yet?

[Rocchinator]

Some small comment about the walk cycle (maybe you should start a critic's lounge thread for this game, so Darth wouldn't get mad):
Instead of letting the characters mass centre differ on the x-axis (he moves left and right in the gif), you should try letting him differ on the y-axis. This way the walk looks more realistic. There is some characteristic walk cycle head movement you can find in every walk cycle tutorial. Maybe check them out.

B2T: This seems to come a long nicely! Any infos on the expected game length or the amount of rooms yet?

Thanks Kumpel you are right about the walkcycle im working on it since the other day the same way with the characters faces, i will start a critics lounge, The game was expected to be a long lenght one because its based on something i wrote and has lots of pages and very very long story. I decided that it was too long for a single game so probably will be a 3 series game:grin:. I have done 9 rooms and 6 are playable by now and i think about 20 min of gameplay I started scripting seriously about a week ago and I think i have a lots of work to do. I'm alone so its a long process the music, the voices, the drawings, the story and the scripting, but i don't complain i love it maybe I could use some help when the game its more advenced.