Chances

[Robert Eric]

I just wrote this short little story I thought you all might like.  It took about an hour to write, but I think it was worth it.

http://pub34.ezboard.com/ftheofficialjackforumfrm5.showMessage?topicID=72.topic

[Renal Shutdown]

Hey

Kinda rollercoaster of emotions..  well, for me anyway.  It had me wishing I was dead, happy that I'm alive, then wishing I was dead, again.

On the whole, tho, it's a depressingly sweet story.  Probably not the descriptive term you were aiming at, but it was.  It made me kinda warm inside, while also making me want to sob like a girl.

I also loved the little fuzzy box of commitment metaphor.  (If it is a metaphor, it's been a while since I studied English).

Hugs
Iqu

[Renal Shutdown]

*Ahem*
'Twas slipping off the page..
*Bump*
(Sorry, but it's worth reading).

[Helm]

Indeed worth reading.

[Scid]

It hit the spot. Some very sincere shit, that story. I enjoyed reading it.

[Dmitri]

That's brilliance with a capital B  

good job RE, you've gotten the message across and managed not to labour the point. All in all it was a very sweet and highly enjoyable story