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#381
General Discussion / Re: We are not bemused
Mon 18/08/2014 19:38:12
My position:

I'll agree that irony can be more than its strictest sense, namely to make a point by saying the opposite, just for the sake of contrast. I can accept that irony can also be the way things just happen, on a few conditions: if there's a narrative context that can be interpreted as if it were almost designed.

For something to be called ironic, there should be some kind of thought, intention or deliberate action before it. I don't think rain can be ironic just because it's not expected. In my opinion, there has to be more of a setup, the result of a decision.

1. The couple has travelled all the way from a really humid place to a some place completely arid just to avoid rain at all cost. On this particular day, however, there's sunshine for the first day in ages in their hometown, while the current destination experiences rain for the first time in recorded history.

2. The husband is a meteorologist who has always had a knack for saying exactly when there's a rainstorm coming, but on his wedding day he's of course not "on duty" so he neglects all the signs and the rest is history.

Now those would be fine cases of irony :)

When it comes to 'literally' I'm a bit torn. Just because it's commonly used as an intensifier ("I literally died out there!"), which of course is just natural, idiomatic English, I'm not sure the definition of the word should have 'virtually' or 'figuratively' appended to it. But anyway, there's no way to stop people from using 'literally' in its opposite meaning now, so that struggle is probably futile.
#382
Critics' Lounge / Re: Too cartoony?
Mon 18/08/2014 12:39:19
I don't quite understand what "too cartoony" even means. Too cartoony for what?

It sure is cartoony, but that's not a bad thing. However, there are certainly things you could improve. For instance, for being a non-realistic drawing, it's unnecessarily bland. Typically, cartoon characters have rather strong personal features, that are easily recognized. You could either work on making his appearance more interesting, or you could exaggerate his posture and expression.

What resolution is the game meant to be in? The sprite is very large now, and the lineart is thick and unrefined. The shading in his face doesn't work. You need to find better ways to apply shadows, because now he just looks dirty, or like he's suffering from some skin condition.

Keep working!
#383
General Discussion / Re: We are not bemused
Mon 18/08/2014 12:27:02
Funny that irony and Alanis should come up here, because me and Snarky (ahem, Snarky and I) exchanged some arguments on facebook recently about it. I don't recall the conversation entirely, but I think I was probably right and Snarky probably wrong.

This is also related to the recent re-listing of the word 'literally' to mean the opposite, 'figuratively', just because people don't know how to distinguish the two.
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/literally (our friend merriam-webster again). Note how definition #2 is 'virtually'...

I mean, language is an organic thing, and all languages change, but when you take away meaning and blend it with other words that already function perfectly, I don't see the point.
#384
Safely home now from Mittens! It's been a great time, and it made me ask myself why it's been so long since I stopped going to Mittens...es. Great trips to impressive castles, walking around picturesque Sintra, late night conversations with old and new friends, board games and lots and lots of beer drinking. Didn't take pictures myself, but they'll surely pop up once the others start returning home.
#385
Oh, I arrive in Lissabon at 9 pm, so don't expect me by the villa before 10:30. Unless you happen to be in the city by then, and I can catch a ride back to Sintra...
#386
Let me know where you plan to be monday night, so I don't go to Sintra while you're cruising in Lissabon
#387
55-word story, voting time
Here are this week's entries. Read them through and then vote for the best 3. Happy reading! Btw; sorry for not responding to or confirming any PMs; I just haven't had the time. Let me know ASAP if I've messed up something in your story.


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2
Ivan held fast to the handle outside the airlock, his knuckles white under layers of protective gloves. "Janice, push the button!" He saw her clearly through the ten-inch protective glass: the tears on her cheeks, her eyes turned away from him.

She wouldn't actually watch him die.

"Push the goddamned button!"

The sun exploded.



3
Till the end, Marlin was stalling their rush: "There's another way! Building ships to escape the sun!"
Annoyed, Atom and Eva moved ahead. Marlin turned to Medoza: "Yaga, your biotech skills could help humanity survive underground!"
Ignored. Still, he got in with them, and the seven set the dial back 250,000 years, to begin again.



4
There it was again â€" that gentle humming noise.  It was pitch black but I could feel something there, somewhere in the darkness…

I heard it once more.  This time I could hear something â€" respiration maybe? â€" very close.  A soft voice said “We have come.  Transportation complete.”

They had come… bur were they friend or foe?



5
I'd breathed them in. I could feel them dismantling me at the cellular level, travelling through my blood like a shoal of piranha. I forced the needle into my neck, releasing the anti-nanos. And then, excruciating pain as the war began. A molecular blitzkrieg upon my organs, the pain began to encompass my whole world.



6
Two robots are cuddling together.
The robot girl asks the robot boy: "What are you thinking about?"
He answers "I was just wondering if you are with me because you love me, or just because of my car."
The robot girl answers "Who told you about me and your car? It is all a lie!"




7
Through fibres and tubes, secured through nine proxies, Richard was close to logging into the highsecurity system.
The virusinfected mail he sent to the securitysupervisor was bitwise sending the logged password to not cause suspiciuos traffic...

End of Transmission!

Beads of perspiration gathered on his forehead when...  mom pulled the plug to make a call.



8
Jacob looked at his mechanical arm, and slowly squeezed his hand. He could feel the intensity surging through his body, as the electronics and his neurons fused. A soft, almost melodic, szwvrt escaped when the tips of his artificial fingers gently touched the metal of his palm. Jacob smiled and thought to himself: Babe Magnet!



9
Evacuation
She cried out in disbelief when the door opened and she saw the same old grey fog; the same sickly green clouds.
”I should be on Hyperion now!” she screamed at the operator who reached out to grab her arms. ”You are, in a way,” he said calmly. ”We just don't erase the originals.”



10
Telling a joke is like guiding tourists through an empty forest. You harness the power of imagery to give the forest life. But you let the tourists bring most of the colour through assumptions. Then you call in a napalm strike to crush what they made. The laughter yields. Too bad I'm a space rat.



11
The prison canteen: the oozing pink glop was as tasty as ever.
She rubbed where her silver necklace had always hung.  Now it was with him, for luck. 
Bonesy whispered: “They made it out!  Guard says they couldn't track them.  We should try again tonight!”
She smiled.  Then she saw something shiny in the glop.



12
Devin #68 opened the door of his Datsun, stepped out and lit a cigarette. It was a fine day for a funeral. Lung cancer again, as always. No one could change that. He stubbed out the cigarette beneath his shoe, took a breath and stepped into the crematorium to say his farewells to Devin #67.



13
Space Alien Madness

"I remember this game," I said, brushing of the arcade sign. A hulking ruin sat behind it. "Loved it as a kid, but then I didn't think it would be prophetic. Why send us here?"

Sam stood frozen with a desiccated tentacle clutched in his hand.

"Sam?"

"They've been here all along."



14
The Circuit Pond has always been a must see for every visitor from outside the Outer Belt. An artificial pond of liquid cooling condensation on a planet that has no natural water is a golden goose for tourism. More than once, loving couples have dunk into it, swearing eternal love, blessed by a little shock.


#388
10 stories submitted so far, keep 'em coming! Let's see if we can get more than last time!
#389
I always have plenty to show and tell, but not that much AGS-related this time around. Will bring a laptop either way because I'll have tons of spare time between flights in Brussels.
#390
Since the last round of this competition was quite the success, why not do it again? I asked myself. So here it is.

The 55 word story competition
SCI-FI EDITION

The rules are simple:

  • You have 5 days to PM me your story.
  • Every story must be exactly 55 words. If you want a title, it must be included in the word count.
  • This time around, the story must feature some kind of sci-fi element. It can be ever so slight, as long as it's clearly there.
  • Let me know if you want some kind of proof reading (if you're not very fluent in English, you might want the most glaring errors corrected). Also let me know if you want non-standard paragraphing or other text formats preserved. 

After the deadline, I will publish all stories anonymously and the community will vote for the top 3 candidates. Once we start voting, you may discuss the entries in the thread, but not reveal any identities.

Check the stories from the previous round here:
http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/forums/index.php?topic=50528.0

Just to reiterate: You don't post your stories here, but you send it to me in a private message.

Good luck!
#391
Alright, sorry for my lack of activity here but we've just moved into a new place and haven't sorted out internet until now, but anyhow.
Have just paid for the house now.

I'll arrive in Lissabon
2014-07-21, 7.05 pm
and will leave
2014-07-25 7:05 am

So it will be short but sweet for me, really looking forward to seeing you all, old friends and new alike!
#392
Hello.
I will probably arrive on Monday the 21st and leave again on Friday 25th, because of... stuff at home. I will naturally pay my full share of the rent anyway.
#393
Ha, you and your puny alphabets that end with z.
Å ngerfulla Ã¥ländska Ã¥lar Ã¥ldras Ã¥rligen. 
#394
The fact that I could never get into GF even one full minute still haunts me. It's like I'm part traitor to the whole adventure game cause.

But man, those controls were a mess.
#395
Wow, good stuff. I bet there's plenty to learn here in terms of pacing and gameplay "flow".
#396
Heck, maybe it's better to just announce #4, #6, and #12 the winners and move on?

It would be almost zero work for me to make a final round, but then I thought to myself, why, really? Why not let these people be the winners and let everyone regroup and charge their batteries for the next edition of this competition, one that everyone can participate in?

It was great to see so many nice entries btw, I hope we can get this kind of interest again. Next time I suggest we have a theme.
#397
We can't vote for anything in the 2008 AGS awards, because we can't travel in time.
#398
Hehe, ok that's fine.
It seemed in your post that you saw the two shared top stories as bold, which would have meant you voted on your own, so thanks for the clarification!

And congrats btw :)
#399
Wham, the bold entries are your own votes, hehe

This means you voted on your own entry :)

Anonymity is up to yourselves - I think it's always best to let authors reveal themselves instead of asking around, but do as you please.
I will start up the final round tomorrow. It will only involve the top three writers, and this time around there'll be a theme.
#400
General Discussion / Re: Door puzzle ideas...
Mon 02/06/2014 19:07:28
Eric, go finish that game of yours!!
I love those puzzle ideas.
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