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Yeah thats awesome, and the animations great too.

Okay well I'll give you a very subtle spoiler:

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Use the Spike on the Chair!!111!one! 

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The games a bit whack so you might have to try all possible commands for doing that - lol

Hope this helped, a bit,
~Bart

Lol where are you stuck, I can help you out Im sure.

lol

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It doesn't mean that.
It means you should be able to say what you want without fear of having your head cut off.
Its not entirely unreasonable.

Holy crap this is such a major overreaction.
Its a comic!
Omfg!11!!!

DonB I agree with you that a bit of colour on that background is great for impact, I was just talking about the choice of colour - I didn't like the yellow.

I seriously liked the orange in the paintover you did... and even the green.

The yellow, not so much.

You're right, it looks great - very professional.
There're just a few things that bug me.

The green/yellow text seems really weird on the whole gray scheme you have going there. Also, the white boxes for the links looks a little too plain.
This is all just in my personal opinion of course.


~Bart

Bartimaeus

Haha thanks man.
Buloght well done, your bg was great!

Raziel:

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Honey is in the bar, tis a wee  bit of a pixel hunt 

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The game crashed after you get kidnapped and you're hanging by your leg on the palm trees with the error saying something about frame 2 not able to be displayed.

Yep had the same problem.
The art is great though, I love it.

Thats a great bg 

Haha, brilliant!

Great entries so far.
ProgZmax that is awesome  :o

I know its cheating but me and my brother worked through this together once and managed to get them all.


So there 

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v206/gaddit/CaveBlitz.png
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Another attempt at learning to paint in Photoshop 

I mimicked the cave structure from this reference: http://www.wizards.com/magic/images/mtgcom/arcana300/cycl_ForgottenCave.jpg

Bart

Hehe I see.
I myself am very much a fan of Paul Kidby's art.


El_Drey thanks for the compliment. What do you mean by paying attention to the lines?

Okay thanks for comments everyone.
Huw it is Vetenari although I only know this from the book I used so i can't really identify with the character very much.
I realise there were quite a few things wonky about the sketch so thanks for poiting them out so cleary.
I think I am gonna take a break from coloring for a bit and rather concentrate on the sketch part first.
Here's a new sketch I did, out of the same book. I think it came out better than the last one; better proportions, etc. Tell me what you think.


The reason im doing these sketches is because I like the style of the original artist so  my next step from here will be to make some of my own characters using these as a reference - but not copying them.

~Bart

Hey, it's been a while since I posted something of my own in the critics lounge so...
I've been trying to sharpen up my drawing and coloring skills since I got Photoshop a short while ago and I recently sketched out a copy of a Discworld character from a book of my brothers. I scanned it into my PC and had a go at coloring it.

Heres the sketch:


And the colored version:



It's meant to look like concept art, offhand yet somehow professional looking. I know I havent achieved this yet but... Im trying to get there 

Crits and ideas and... anything would be appreciated.