It looks good.. Very Poserish, but good 
The face kind of bothers me though. I think you might want to clean it up in photoshop, getting in and taking away the stray pixels.. Actually, it might be better to just redraw the face completely to give it more personality. That's really the one thing that bothers me about poser; Everybody looks the same. If you make one face in photoshop and paste it into each frame it would really improve the character..
EDIT: also, you might want to change the light source. Having it from the side likethat might look weird if the character is in a place wit a light source on the other side. I'd suggest putting the light source in front of and slightly above the character (in other words, right between the character and you). That would give less of a hint of where the light is coming from, so that the backgrounds won't clash with the characters.

The face kind of bothers me though. I think you might want to clean it up in photoshop, getting in and taking away the stray pixels.. Actually, it might be better to just redraw the face completely to give it more personality. That's really the one thing that bothers me about poser; Everybody looks the same. If you make one face in photoshop and paste it into each frame it would really improve the character..
EDIT: also, you might want to change the light source. Having it from the side likethat might look weird if the character is in a place wit a light source on the other side. I'd suggest putting the light source in front of and slightly above the character (in other words, right between the character and you). That would give less of a hint of where the light is coming from, so that the backgrounds won't clash with the characters.