Well, I can say i went through it briefly, and i noticed that you start very thoroughly and really speed things up at the end. I know, thats the point where the reader should got the point, but maybe there is someone that doesnt understand some things so it could be difficult for him.
did you understand what i said?
(cuz i barely did)...
btw, I like your pic
did you understand what i said?

btw, I like your pic
