There are some major perspective issues at work here ...

I'd strongly suggest (unless you're going for that off-kilter look) tightening it up a bit perspective wise.
Also ... there is almost no shading. The shirts on the bed appear as part of the pattern of the bedspread rather than as if they're setting on top of it. There is an inconsistency of line-weight as well (though that only slightly bugs me)
It's a good start but the lack of perspective and shading detracts from the image over-all.

I'd strongly suggest (unless you're going for that off-kilter look) tightening it up a bit perspective wise.
Also ... there is almost no shading. The shirts on the bed appear as part of the pattern of the bedspread rather than as if they're setting on top of it. There is an inconsistency of line-weight as well (though that only slightly bugs me)
It's a good start but the lack of perspective and shading detracts from the image over-all.