It's certainly not bad ...
I have a few concerns:
1) The bottoms of the bed carry off the screen ... so the only place for the player to walk is in between the beds?
2) The bottom of the mattresses don't appear to continue down past the foot board ... you can't see them where the slats are, and you should be able to.
3) The curtains seem to vanish into the window frame, it just looks a little odd.
4) Is there going to be a chair for the computer? This would also cut down on the 'walkable' areas for the player.
5) The perspective seems a bit on the odd side ...
Other than those concerns I think you have a good start to a background here. Shading and details are the key.
Good luck!
I have a few concerns:
1) The bottoms of the bed carry off the screen ... so the only place for the player to walk is in between the beds?
2) The bottom of the mattresses don't appear to continue down past the foot board ... you can't see them where the slats are, and you should be able to.
3) The curtains seem to vanish into the window frame, it just looks a little odd.
4) Is there going to be a chair for the computer? This would also cut down on the 'walkable' areas for the player.
5) The perspective seems a bit on the odd side ...
Other than those concerns I think you have a good start to a background here. Shading and details are the key.
Good luck!